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a care FIVE WINTER HAIKU frozen is the moon every star an icy tear odd sort of beauty frost nipped the pumpkin charmed us all but never left strange jack-o-lantern hear their forlorn howl misting muzzles raised on high cruel winter’s heralds sitting by the hearth old dog asleep and dreaming hot woodfire crackling mantel clock tick tock two mice in breadbox eating i without a care

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Date: 1/24/2011 4:47:00 AM
SIMPLY AWESOME!!!!! my friend. Lainie
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:41:00 AM
I am stopping by this morning to read your amazing poetry, and to thank you for your kind comments on mine Daver. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:12:00 AM
Nice Haiku series Daver, they do indeed fall into series....:)
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Date: 1/10/2011 5:44:00 PM
Daver, love the first one and last.. well they are all awesome.. goes great with title..p.d.
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Date: 1/10/2011 12:36:00 PM
Good use if imagery in this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/8/2011 7:53:00 AM
Well done, Dave! Enjoyed the read of each one! Have a nice one!...Love, Gert
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Date: 1/8/2011 6:45:00 AM
This write all seems to fall in place dear poet ! I can just see you typing away, never wanting to stop your poetic train of thoughts ! Awesome Dave ! much love, james
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Date: 1/6/2011 5:20:00 PM
Good ones..Enjoyed reading your work..May your gift overflow onto the pages of soup..Sara
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Date: 1/6/2011 4:38:00 PM
Now shivering Dave at the beauty of each Haiku u have creatively penned my friend.. could u do some Summer ones for the "Sweetheart"? it is freezing here in New Jersey and snowstorm expected tomorrow... oh no... thankxxx..luv...
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Date: 1/6/2011 4:03:00 PM
Enjoyed all the five haiku with apt images expliciting the picture of the winter, daver
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Date: 1/6/2011 2:01:00 PM
I just love this kind of haiku, Daver. My favs were the first, second, oh heck, I loved them all!!
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Date: 1/6/2011 12:12:00 PM
skillfully crafted with such descriptive images of a season.. splendid 'kus, daver.. :) nette
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