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Five Three Eight

Five Three Eight In that order See it all the time Reminding me of Stan, a really wonderful man Who was not great at business I worked for him as a cashier when I was sixteen He always had a smile but was new in town Almost no one shopped in our store Because he was new He was so happy when anyone came in I felt so sad for him I babysat for him and his wife sometimes Their children were darling cute and smart Two, four and six, all knock-offs of him and his wife A cute couple, sweet, but neither realizing Small town USA is not open to newcomers Five Three Eight His store number The thing that killed him At a young age The night before his grandson was born May third, two thousand and eight The same as his store number

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Date: 5/24/2019 9:11:00 AM
Stan is so lifelike. Strictly speaking, he is because you wrote him, Caren. I like him.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/24/2019 8:05:00 PM
He was a real man, and the sweetest boss. I knew him as a teenager and I was assigned to do his bookkeeping from headquarters when I was about 27.

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