Five Senses

Five Senses? 
Why would I want them if

Touch is weak when it goes through the invisible body.

Smell is not offering enough of substitute for the freshness of the Himalayan peaks.

Hearing is not needed when Soul is listening.

Taste is all there is to Freedom.

Vision, oh, vision… the blessing and curse! 
I'll leave it in this body, so I could see it better.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 28, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Clever poem Nat ST... LINDA
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March 29, 2016 at 4:00 AM
Thank you :)
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