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all my senses ... long to make sense ... of YOU what greets my gaze is perfect imperfection lines and curves and shapes and colors and movements mingled with sacred intent in sublime symmetry - features that alone might be found disconcerting collectively arranged in ways that steal the steadiest of breaths and define envy for the gods themselves ... then, a scent ethereal ... weaving its quiet way into my head and blood bewitching my mind with a rarefied air of you and Je Reviens - an intoxicating mix of essences, visceral aromas that rival breezes from the of Gardens of Babylon and send the mind spinning ... tumbling ... to say your voice is music would be doing it an extraordinary injustice like some anointed dove from heaven it lilts on the atmosphere and when you press it tenderly to my ear in wafted whispers its voltaic song penetrates my coursings and ignites my core harmony and heat and will ... aria and fire ... I live for the feel of you ... your skin is warm satin and silk a catkin corporeality - electric and responsively raw sexy little bumps erupt at my touch your perky bow lips - an alluring mix of raspberries and chili peppers and the indescribable perfection of your hand in mine as though your fingers were created from the spaces between ... and oh, your taste ... the many flavors of you are like a banquet of rare piquancy your mouth a tangy, sugary bubblegum treat dermal surfaces, savory and salty - a tease for where they lead … and your unique angelic nectar like some exotic potion created and sanctified to bind my marrow biochemically and render me ... unhinged … yes - all my senses ... long to make sense of YOU yet I pray like a child that they never do for the joy is in the journey ... and the divine … discovery. ~ 5th Place ~ in the "Five Senses" Poetry Contest, Viv Wigley, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 2/27/2021 3:56:00 AM
Congrats on your winner in Brian's contest. Sara
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Date: 2/25/2021 11:03:00 AM
Congrats and kudos, Greg! Wonderful blending of the senses into an inclusive romantic journey.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/25/2021 1:52:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Sam - great to hear from you, my friend! :-)
Date: 8/21/2018 3:11:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/21/2018 4:57:00 PM
Many kind thank you's, Sara ... I greatly appreciate it! :-) <3
Date: 8/16/2018 10:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hot, hot, hot! Enjoyed! :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/20/2018 2:42:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Susan ... my favorite subject matter! ;-) <3
Date: 8/14/2018 12:25:00 PM
Yes!! Every curve needs tracing, each moment lips should caress. I love the way your words play, and then stay. This is so soft, sensual and romantic. The right amount of passion touches everything. Deep sigh. ~ Brandy
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/15/2018 10:12:00 PM
Thank you very much, Brandy, I'm pleased that you like this one ... this is such a fun and favorite genre for me, but not everyone's cup-of-tea. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 8/14/2018 10:26:00 AM
This is sensual, romantic, and so very beautiful !! Lucky in love, as they say !! This says it all !!! Beautiful work, Gregory !!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/15/2018 10:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Carrie, I so greatly appreciate it! Your opinion means a great deal to me, as you are one of my favorite PS poets. Blessings, friend! :-) <3
Date: 8/12/2018 8:19:00 AM
'as though your fingers were created ... from the spaces between mine ...' This is so wonderfully romantic, Gregory. Beats a bunch of red roses any day!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/13/2018 4:18:00 AM
That's very sweet of you to say, Wendy, and I'm so happy you enjoyed it ... thank you so much, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 8/12/2018 6:20:00 AM
Yes , all my senses ..long to make sense of you.. LOVELY. All the best.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/13/2018 4:17:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Anisha ... I'm so glad you liked it! :-) <3
Date: 8/11/2018 6:14:00 PM
Like the line: as though your fingers were created ... from the spaces between mine ... Excellent write, dear poet!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/13/2018 4:17:00 AM
That's very kind of you, Kim, thank you so much, my friend! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 8/11/2018 7:57:00 AM
Ooh hot stuff! Slathering sensual seductive soliloquy so sexy ;p Good luck in the contest Greg! xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/13/2018 4:16:00 AM
leased you enjoyed it, Mo ... this was fun! :-) <3

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