Five Fun Footles For Contest

Nookie
Bookie

Cookie
Shnookie

Staring 
Daring

Her smile
Beguile

She winked
I blinked

Staring
Erring

Undressed
I’m blessed

Amazed
I gazed

Caressed
Her breast

She punched
I hunched

Gambles
Shambles

June 9, 2015

A Gambler Tries His Hand(and eye) at a Strip Staring Contest
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Callus Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 8:08 AM
Great showing, David!! I thought the rules clearly stated 'no hands'!:) A gamble does usually produce a flutter! Congrats on your win. // paul
Hamilton Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 2:36 AM
very inventive Dave congrats on win hugs 7
Wigley Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 12:58 AM
Well done, David. Nice one. Regards, Viv
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 11:08 PM
great job!! I sure enjoyed these, Congrats.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 8:31 PM
These were much fun to read David. I can't write them worth a darn. Kudos!
Nance Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:52 PM
haha funny!!
Yant Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:08 PM
Congratulations on a great win!! Just got to know when to hold 'em and know when to roll 'em. Much Love
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 2:52 PM
Great humour David:-)Congratulations :-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Hi David, Gambles Shambles LOL.... funny it is :) Congratulations on your FIVE FABULOUS FUNNY FOOTLES. hugs **SKAT**
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