Five Fun Footles

oh look
she cooks

curry
for me

quite nice
hot spice

oh dear
cold beer

foul smell
she yells

bad tum
sore bum

in loo
since two

For 'Five fun footles' competition, sponsored by Jan Allison June 6th 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 11:18 PM
hahaha. Yours are GREAT. Congrats for the win.
Wigley Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 11:52 PM
Thanks Andrea, my metabolism has now stabilized. Viv x
Nance Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:59 PM
hahaha ohhh noooooo! lol
Wigley Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 4:10 PM
Casarah, quick- open a window! Viv x
Allison Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 2:57 PM
You know my sense of humour Mr Viv - this made me laugh out loud. Congratulations :-) hugs Jan xx.
Wigley Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Thanks, Jan, and you'll be pleased to know I left the seat down. Viv x
A  Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 2:52 PM
Viv :) Congratulations on your FIVE FABULOUS FUNNY FOOTLES. hugs **SKAT**
Wigley Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Cheers, Skat. Viv x
Callus Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 9:46 AM
Oh yes! Jan will love this...I did:))) // paul
Wigley Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 11:57 AM
Thanks, Paul, hopefully it will hit the spot. Unlike the curry. Regards, Viv
Ryerson Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 5:31 AM
I don't consider this funny at ALL Viv...I consider it: HILARIOUS!! - Tim
Wigley Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 6:14 AM
Thanks, Tim, I hope that you're not trying to curry favour with me..... Regards, Viv
Holmes Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 6:13 PM
I laughed alot Viv!...nice write...Peter
Wigley Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 10:07 PM
Hopefully not from bitter experience :) Regards, Viv
Arrow Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 11:41 AM
lol...fabulous Viv
Wigley Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Thanks, Cupid, for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Carmack Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 8:38 AM
I like this. Best wishes concerning the surgery when the time comes.
Wigley Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Thanks Rob, appreciate your concern, and thanks for the good wishes. hoping you're well, too. Regards, Viv
Lasarus Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 12:04 PM
Viv, marvelous, I'm speechless :) Regards, Emi (I'm just a beginner)
Wigley Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 11:33 PM
Go on, Emilia, have a go. Thanks for dropping by. Viv x
La France Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Viv this is great, wonderful, and awesome and thanks for visiting my footle poem
Wigley Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Sorry I took so long to reply, BW, but I was still on the toilet. Have a good weekend, Viv x
Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 7:57 AM
- Well done, Viv :))) - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a great weekend! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
June 6, 2015 at 9:39 AM
likeså , Viv x
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