Five Footles: Things Not Too Great

An Unwashed Handkerchief

Stanky 
Hanky

Prison Noise

Slammer
clamor

Construction Noise

Hammer
Clamor

Bad English

Gringo 
Lingo

Seen in the Buff

Granny
Fanny

April 20, 2022
For A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Watt Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 10:16 AM
"Brilliant Footle Writer": Dandy Andie
Horne Avatar
April 27, 2022 at 6:47 AM
ha ha ha, i always love your footles - especially love the granny fanny
Kerr Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 11:49 AM
I think these are too great, Andrea. Superb and cleverly constructed. Howard
Baker Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 10:55 AM
Nothing but smiles for your fun poetry, Andrea. I need a little fun in my life. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 3:36 AM
Got a chuckle and laughter is the best medicine. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit and nice review. Sara
Horsman Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 1:44 AM
Brilliant! love 'em all.
La France Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Andrea, I like your Footles, I find these so hard to do. Best of luck in the contest ~Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 5:31 AM
LOL…that last one…he he
Buhagiar Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 2:17 AM
Great footles that made me smile. Hugs.
Cunningham Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 10:42 PM
Another great string of footles Andrea, I love the form. Tom
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