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Five Fabulous Fun Footles For Contest

My Crazy In-Laws In-laws Strange flaws Advice Not nice Bad meals Old heels! No fun Steals son Much lies Break ties! FIVE FABULOUS FUN FOOTLES FOR CONTEST Sponsored by: Jan Allison Syllables: 20 checked at howmanysyllables.com October 22, 2016

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/30/2016 2:31:00 PM

That's a good one. I hope that is not autobiographical. Congrats on your win, luloo. Agnes

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2016 1:19:00 PM

- Never satisfied :))) - This was truly fun, Laura :) - Congrats on your great first place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2016 1:00:00 PM

GREAT job, Laura . OH, those dang monster in laws!!! Congrats.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2016 12:58:00 PM

Many congrats on your top spot LuLoo I loved the pic too:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/27/2016 8:20:00 AM

Well done, Laura:) but I sincerely hope this is fiction:)

Constance La France

Date: 10/24/2016 8:00:00 PM

Those darn in-laws...best of luck in the contest. Sent you a soupmail.

Phillip Garcia

Date: 10/23/2016 2:32:00 PM

Encourage daughters/ To sue husbands/ Throw them in jail/ Etc/ - the word in-laws inspired bitterness in me it seems. Still a triumphant write. I just commented to Alexis that this style seemed like a daunting challenge but you've maneuvered it flawlessly