Five Fabulous Fun Footles

Hot chick, How slick Short skirt, Must flirt Firm bum, Oh yum A bulge, Oh fudge! Shemale, Wrong trail! 10/25/2016

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2016 10:12:00 AM

Footles so fine upon the winners’ list are awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2016 5:11:00 PM

Congrats to you, MArk!

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 10/31/2016 5:19:00 AM

Thank you Andrea - appreciate you reading my poetry. Mark

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2016 1:42:00 PM

- Congrats on your great second place in the contest, Mark - A fun one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 10/31/2016 5:18:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise Appreciate the reading. Mark

Jan Allison

Date: 10/30/2016 1:32:00 PM

Great fun footle Mark this made me LOL:-) I would have given a top spot but bulge and fudge don't have exact rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 10/31/2016 5:17:00 AM

Thank you Jan - LOL - oh fudge! I do appreciate the placement though, I will work on my rhyming Special day for you, Mark

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2016 8:28:00 PM

haha, I bet Jan loves this one, Mark. there are lots of great footles going on around here.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 10/28/2016 12:20:00 AM

Thank you for reading - I hope Jan enjoys - well i enjoyed writing it, and couldn't stop laughing because its a true story in fact, my brother was admiring what he thought was a lady and when I pointed out the almost obvious he was so embarrassed, this was a few years ago. I suppose you had to be there to get the funny side of the story. All the best, Mark

Darren White

Date: 10/25/2016 7:54:00 AM

Hahaha. This cracked me up :) Good luck.

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 10/25/2016 11:37:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed - thanks for reading. Mark

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/25/2016 2:42:00 AM

Hi Mark, You penned some funny footles! I wish you luck in the "Five Fabulous Fun Footles " contest: -) Alexis

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe
Date: 10/25/2016 11:35:00 PM

Thank you Alexis - And thanks for the support, much appreciated. Mark