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Five Fabulous Footles: Big Jake

Big Jake Love’s Cake He Ate Whole Crate He’s Mad Ain't Sad Not Lean Just Mean Large Tum Huge Bum 3-21-17 Alexis Y. Contest : Five Fabulous Footles Sponsor: Jan Allison Note: I hope nobody finds this offensive. This was my attempt to write a humorous Footle.

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/6/2017 4:09:00 PM

Nothing offensive about these footles, Alexis! Just pure fun:) Congratulations on placing first!! Regards // paul

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/4/2017 10:22:00 AM

This is great, Alexis, definitely better than my first attempt, ha ha:) congratulations:) a 7:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2017 8:19:00 PM

first attempt and you did FANTASTIC!!! Congrats, and I like the "ain't"

John Michaels

Date: 4/2/2017 5:00:00 AM

Nice Footles - they really made me chuckle! Congrats on your win!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/1/2017 6:15:00 AM

Ending too funny! Congrats!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/1/2017 1:11:00 AM

Big congrats Alexis,for fun footle. Best wishes.

Roy Pett

Date: 3/31/2017 5:29:00 PM

Brilliant fun write Alexis, congratulations on your well deserved win, Roy. :))

Jan Allison

Date: 3/31/2017 4:59:00 PM

Great humour Alexis - no need to apologise for anything that you write:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/31/2017 5:23:00 PM

Hi Jan, You hosted a great contest. I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate my placement in your contest:-) Alexis

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 3/24/2017 10:10:00 AM

SCORE! You made this old man smile — thanks! Keep footl'n kiddo;-). Huggaduggaroonies! ~ j

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/24/2017 4:46:00 PM

Hi John, It's so good to see you. I'm glad it made you smile:-) Alexis

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/22/2017 9:34:00 PM

Offended? I am very offended!!! Where does this Jake live and why did he not wish to share with me this cake!!!!! :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/22/2017 10:22:00 AM

Cool footle, Alexis. Gave me a huge smile. Got some funny lines in them ... he ate, whole crate. That's a riot. A 7 for sure. Love and hugs, lady.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2017 5:32:00 PM

great job, Alexis. I enjoyed these. On third one, change to "not sad". then you will have two syllables instead of three!

Chris Green

Date: 3/21/2017 11:22:00 AM

This was funny my friend. It seems we were both on the weight wagon poetically speaking, of course. :)