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Fitness Smell

I want fitness and what do I get A field of blue-bonnets, I just bet I don’t smell like that It’s just an attack Of the nose senses as I sure sweat
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/10/2017 7:34:00 PM
Maybe it's blue bonnet margarine!! Too much of THAT will get you a heart attack!
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Date: 11/10/2017 11:10:00 AM
haha...the kids use body Axe to disguise the smell nowadays
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Date: 11/10/2017 9:42:00 AM
Ooh, what a poet smells...lost in the daydream of a field, as you toil away!
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Date: 11/10/2017 8:20:00 AM
It's all part of the human thingy I actually smell purdy when I "perspire"!!!
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Date: 11/10/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thanks for the laugh with this Limerick Russell :)
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Date: 11/10/2017 6:08:00 AM
Good one Russell, when I used to go to the gym, I hardly sweated, probably did not work hard enough..
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