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Fitness Smell

I want fitness and what do I get
A field of blue-bonnets, I just bet
I don’t smell like that
It’s just an attack
Of the nose senses as I sure sweat

Russell Sivey

Copyright © Russell Sivey | Year Posted 2017

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Andrea Dietrich

November 10, 2017 at 7:34 PM

Maybe it's blue bonnet margarine!! Too much of THAT will get you a heart attack!

November 10, 2017 at 11:10 AM

haha...the kids use body Axe to disguise the smell nowadays

November 10, 2017 at 9:42 AM

Ooh, what a poet smells...lost in the daydream of a field, as you toil away!

November 10, 2017 at 8:20 AM

It's all part of the human thingy I actually smell purdy when I "perspire"!!!

November 10, 2017 at 7:11 AM

Thanks for the laugh with this Limerick Russell :)

November 10, 2017 at 6:08 AM

Good one Russell, when I used to go to the gym, I hardly sweated, probably did not work hard enough..

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