Fissures and Collisions

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6/5/2024 for Poetry should be felt Poetry Contest sponsored by Suzette Richards

earthquakes and fissures routinely affect politics and relationships as they act on the earth's crust tectonic plates clash in subduction zones they separate at divergent boundaries a quake strikes will I engage or detach? wisdom will prevail I will not be smashed or fall between the cracks

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Hilo Poet

Date: 6/5/2024 11:31:00 AM

David, our volcano erupted for half-a-day's worth of tourist overflow earlier this week, 4.1 strongest and 127 more 3.3 and less quakes that day--happy to add that my iPhone behaved wisely too, that day, Aloha, William

David Crandall
Date: 6/5/2024 11:58:00 AM

Wow! I was not even aware of what's going on there, out here in CA. Enjoy the show! (if that's the right way to look at it). Aloha!