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Fishy

As my closed eyes open and the dream of my calves playing among the corals curtail, I realize that my body is contiguiting the earth, perhaps the shore, because I can feel the sharps rays of the blazing sun puncture my tender skin. Yes. It is the shore. I have beached myself, for I can feel the grains of sand resining to my throat rooves. Ouch! There's a sudden ache in my rostrum. OH those goddamn Dioxins and Furans! Must have corrupted me when I ate those planktons for breakfast. I am now running out of breath, the sun is too coruscating and I'm dehydrating at an accelerated rate, and and I'm drying out. I know it. I can feel it. Are these my last moments? Is this my destiny? With an overly-dehydrating body and failing organs, I decide to take one last walk down memory lane. Oh my charming lady, my adorable babies, never will I consign to oblivion the wonderful aeon I had with my mates, travelling in pods to outlying, faraway waters. Ooh! I'm getting worse. My breath is quickening, it's almost over. I see someone walking over to me, perhaps a rescuer. Looks like he's got his little daughter along with him. Under the dazzling sun, the tears of the little girl dry up leaving stains on her trepidated face. Anytime now. The little human places her soft palm on my paper-like body, and whispers something which happens to be the last words I ever hear. "Fishy? Why are you sleeping?" As my shutters close and the seagulls await my death, I fall into a deep slumber. From which I will never awake.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/14/2016 5:50:00 PM
Well done, Mirika,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/13/2016 3:42:00 PM
haha Yes it is FISHY, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 6/13/2016 2:01:00 PM
Fantastic! From a fish's point of view!
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Date: 6/13/2016 11:46:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Mirika. :)
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