Fishing Sonnet

Get a line down, something has to follow. 
Toss a lure to a passing muse hoping
that it'll bite. A word fisher that will wallow
in the shallows, flick fly back and forth, hooking

the first weighty idea. We want substance, 
settle for fingerlings, if all we apprehend.
A fat muse appears, and we at once
are duty bound to hook it and rend

it fit for public view. That's the problem. 
Each idea reduced to maximum readability.
It is found on laugh tracks on redone
comedy,  lest one not get the point or defy

good taste, rewriting Henry Potter for illiterate
American audience. Fished out is our fate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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June 13, 2017 at 3:58 PM
I think you are right about that. I have to remind myself I'm writing for myself and not others. Sad, but true.
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