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Amber sunrise, clouds flee Brushing against the horizon. Cool river's plashy bank calls. Dawn awakes scatter rays. End of bait string dangles, Float swirls. First, a nibble, Got a fish; it bit my finger Hard and got away. I once again cast my line Just sat, watch, and wait. Kipper in its depth nibbled, Line took a tug, a splash, Makes a dive. Not again, it's off Out into the open. Pole away, oars in hand Quiet push home. 11/2/2021

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Date: 11/2/2021 9:46:00 AM
An ending sigh… nice story poem. Blessings to you!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/2/2021 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Sally, an ending sigh. At least he got to go fishing. Hugs Eve
Date: 11/2/2021 9:31:00 AM
Superb writing, Eve. You've set a marvelous scene which is well-illustrated by the boy fishing off the boat. Good stuff!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/2/2021 11:43:00 AM
Thank you, Milton, I am glad you like it.
Date: 11/2/2021 7:18:00 AM
What a beautifully written poem Eve and the picture is perfect….lovely! Debx
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Date: 11/2/2021 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Deb, for the inspiring comment. Hugs Eve
Date: 11/2/2021 12:02:00 AM
Lovely abc poem. I have never written one. Hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/2/2021 11:45:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. Hugs Eve

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