Fishing For Dinner

River flows wildly Salmon swim upstream to spawn I’ll throw in my line
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 5:10 PM
Great visual Michael, I read a haiku by Abe Lopez called Salmon Run and it reminded me of it...Raul
Atanacio Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 7:35 AM
If you were a Bear you wouldn't have to, I love your writing PERIOD! And I don't need a line to read it :)
Strand Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 12:21 AM
A reality check Michael.Nice one rgds Brian
Ehigiator Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 10:36 PM
Michael, this is Great.. I can picture this beautiful sight so clearly...Very creative, Nicely done. God Bless and thank you for your kind words on my poetry*Tyesha
Devonshire Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 6:50 PM
Michael, Love your haiku. I'm a fishing fan and this work creates a nice image. Thanks for sharing it. Carolyn
Wilson Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 4:34 PM
Makes me want to go to the river tomorrow.
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February 12, 2009 at 2:13 PM
I hope you catch THE BIG ONE!!!!! I enjoyed this one. It brings back my own fishing memories. Karen
Gorelick Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 1:14 PM
I love to fish..dont care if I catch a thing..good one. BG
Jordan Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 12:40 PM
Michael - Just a little ways off there is the Sacramento River which has simply a wonderful run of salmon each year - Wish you was near by bro we could do us a little fishing i reckon - God Bless, MJ
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February 12, 2009 at 12:38 PM
What lovely images this creates. Plus, I love salmon. Wonderful Haiku, Michae! Love, Robin
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February 12, 2009 at 9:02 AM
Great great haiku, great feel to this one. Regards: Déirdre
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