Fishing

We set off full of hope into the night
as it grew blacker towards the end 
of the jetty where shorelights
dimmed to a distant glow. 
Wind drove a swell to boom 
and crash against the pylons below
sending a shudder through our feet.
The air was bitterly cold.

Baited hooks hung in the dark depths
on the end of a taut line 
where every twitch and tug
was telegraphed to a finger
primed to detect that tell tale pull.
The rod ready to be whipped upwards 
to imbed a hook into an open mouth.
We would wait…and wait.

An hour would pass. Time meant
nothing to my father who would stare
into a blank abyss in a trance like silence
as if nothing existed outside 
of his vision into the great beyond.
Two hours would pass. Not a single fish
would bite. The only break was a pause
to renew the bait on hooks.

Bored, wanting to go, afraid to enter 
the sanctity of my fathers dreaming,
I entered my own. Propped against
the jetty railing, coiled against the cold,
I crawled inwards towards my familiar home.
Hours later, without a fish,
we would walk back along the jetty
still in our silence, both of us
unable to tell each other 
where we had been,
both of us alone.

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Date: 3/22/2025 2:17:00 PM
Oh Paul how very beautiful and how very sad ….l felt it all. The last line hits hard and says it all…..As an adult now….where do you think your dad went in his mind? I hope thats not to personal a question…ignore it if it is. Another Paul beauty that l just love! Debx
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Date: 3/25/2025 6:21:00 PM
Thankyou Deb for your sensitive and thoughtful comment.... not sure where the destination was...we all have our private places where we go to get away or connect or to listen to the unexplainable. A touch of mystery is in all of us. Take dear friend, Paul
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