Fishin'

I troll downstream; drop anchor and wait
To seize the day with just the right bait
I feel my first hit, a pulse one can’t see
Though anxious, I wait patiently 
For opportunity to bite and run
In the struggle, break free and
Reach for the sun

Feeling alive with vision true
I see the shimmer.  I glimpse a view
Tension mounts.  To the challenge, I rise
Reeling and reeling, and then I surmise
This quarry requires less drag and more 
line
Fighting, more fighting
I give it more time

At last, there before me, a beautiful sight
A trophy for certain...I hope that I’m right
An angler I’m not, but today I’m a king
If only I can carefully boat this thing
Then I heard a loud wail with the fish still a 
stream
My alarm clock announced that
It all was a dream

                              ~Christopher Thor Britt 
(2014)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 4/30/2014 7:02:00 PM
deay as it goes, christopher.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 4/30/2014 5:43:00 AM
Very brilliant and enjoyable write on fishing. Congrats on the win, Christopher
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Date: 4/29/2014 5:03:00 PM
Christopher, . Congratulations, in Caleb's "Gone Fishin'" contest.. always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/26/2014 8:11:00 PM
What a great entry for the contest and the ending sealed it!!!
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Date: 2/26/2014 12:11:00 AM
That was a dream most men wish was reality. I personally don't care for fishing, but you have described in decent detail, a hobby followed by many.
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