Sara Kendrick Poet Rengay

Fisherman (Co-Written With Doris Culverhouse)

Swimming, life carefree
Net tightens around the school
Deliverance, grace

May your hook always be cast
Where you least expect fish caught

Synergism, save
These lost fish, grateful intent 
Catch and release, Life

Responsible now
Freedom, new life in warm water
Breach, spout words, joy, sing

School of life, protective school
Numbers rise with the right bait

Bait, love, nuturance
Guide... North Star...The leader Home
Reward eternal life

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Tim Ryerson February 28, 2010 at 6:41 PM May we PLEASE have the pleasure of another co-write from the mother and daughter team?... Think I'll go fishin' next weekend! (Probably won't even get a nibble, but who cares?) - Tim

Carolyn Devonshire February 20, 2010 at 10:36 AM You make us long for fishing season, Sara and Doris! Indeed, "catch and release" is the way to go if you're not going to eat your catch. You remind me of dreams in which I'm a fish trying to guide the others away from the hooks and nets. We take conservation of our marine resources very seriously here in Florida and I like the way you compare the fish's struggles to those encountered by humans. Well done, Dynamic Duo! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser February 20, 2010 at 6:48 AM Nice piece from a lovely due, well done Doris & Sara >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 20, 2010 at 4:35 AM Perfection! This is a great Mother-Daughter write, you two. Big Smiles, Dane Ann

Doris Culverhouse February 19, 2010 at 3:04 PM great ending mom!! thanks for the collaboration!!

John Freeman February 19, 2010 at 12:17 PM Awesom cooperative write Sara, and Doris. You two make an inspiring couple. Keep up the good work. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown February 19, 2010 at 11:33 AM Congratulations on the exceptional Co-Write Sara and Doris. I enjoyed it very much. Please give us more. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop February 19, 2010 at 9:18 AM Good cooperative write, Sara! You both are a good team. Hope I'm feeling better tomorrow as I had a long session at the dentist's today. Took some pain killer, but did not help very much. Tomorrow will be a cat exhibit here which I will visit. Wishing you a nice weekend and thank you for your comments...Gert

Doris Culverhouse February 19, 2010 at 7:34 AM good haiku,

Susan Palli February 19, 2010 at 3:22 AM loved it!

Brian Strand February 19, 2010 at 1:27 AM Positive poetry Sara and Doris.Thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 18, 2010 at 8:04 PM A great combined effort with stunning results.. I read the entire poem on Doris's list.. u two make a dynamic duo...luv.. Linda-Marie.. I have company the next four days so will be on and off site whenever I can between entertaining and visiting.. luv..

Margaret Foster February 18, 2010 at 6:19 PM Wise words. well done......Margaret

Doris Culverhouse February 18, 2010 at 5:25 PM I wrote the next haiku, check it out. hope you are feeling good.

Mike Butler February 18, 2010 at 3:48 PM Very enjoyable Rengay. Nicely written! -Mike

John Loving Iii February 18, 2010 at 3:22 PM mother daughter? i knew it wouldn't be long. john