Fish Slice

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The holes aren't equidistant
and the spot welds aren't spot-on,
the varnish on the handle over sixty years has gone.
It lies with all the modern stuff,
their plastic and brushed steel
but for all it's vintage shabbiness
it has a pleasing feel
and does the job time and again
as it's supposed to do,
no reason after all this time to swap
for something new.
Dad made it in his lunch breaks,
such tinkering fulfilled him,
sadly in an environment
that eventually killed him.
Some show their love to their fair wives
with flowers, which is nice,
but true love comes from lasting gifts
like my late Mum's fish slice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/3/2017 8:43:00 PM
My mom is 90. She bought a cast aluminum pot before I was born. The lid handle kept breaking off and my dad would replace it each time. I still make her homemade beef vegetable soup in it. Such memories we have.
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Date: 6/21/2017 10:08:00 AM
I'm so happy you are back. A little Limerick is my tack. Hope all is well. Your poems are swell. You always did have the knack.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/27/2017 11:43:00 PM
Thanks, Jean, hope you are your normally ebullient sassy self. Viv x
Date: 6/18/2017 5:04:00 PM
Ahh - never truer words spoke "Viv' - the simplicity of a simple tool - memories held and never forgot - thanks for sharing this with us x
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/19/2017 12:23:00 AM
Thanks, Indiana. Probably the first ever poem written about a fish slice- a world exclusive. Viv
Date: 6/17/2017 11:14:00 AM
We have changed so many things through the years, Mr Viv. We changed just for the sake of change, when what we had was still working perfectly. Homemade is always better:)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 6/19/2017 12:23:00 AM
Indeedy, Daniel. If it ain't broke, don't fix it. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
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