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July 31,2023

For Brian Strand's Contest No. 1233 New Poems Only

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~“”“””~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~”””~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~””“”~~~~~~””“”~~~~~~~~~~~~~”””” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “” ~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~”””~~~~~~~~~~~~~”””””~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~””””~~~~ /////// in fast flowing mountain stream in a deep valley a sprightly fish tries hard to swim up the current / o) but fails remains almost stationary although it struggles all the while///// \ in vain, at the end of its patience it swims downstream with the flow\\\\\ stores energy to try at later a time and succeed swimming in the stream of life be a wise fish \\\\\\\ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ “”””~~~~~~~~~~~~~””””~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~””””~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~“”””””””””””””~~~~~~~~””””””””””~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~”””””~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~”””””~~~~~~~~””””~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~”””~~~~~~

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Kim Merryman

Date: 8/5/2023 7:51:00 PM

An excellent shape poem, Subimal! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/6/2023 10:56:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/3/2023 8:03:00 AM

Dear Subimal, your poem enchants both visually and poetically. You capture the moments of a sprightly fish's struggle, perseverance and its place in the cycle of life with gripping imagery and poetic finesse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/6/2023 10:55:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan for your visit and encouraging comment I value very much. You are right, in our struggle in life we need perseverance and wait for opportunities to succeed.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/3/2023 6:32:00 AM

Creative, Subimal, congratulations:)

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/6/2023 10:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, Joanna.

Daisy Meadows

Date: 7/31/2023 12:49:00 AM

A good way of displaying your poem. Enjoyed reading this. Well done.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/6/2023 10:50:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jeanette for liking the poem.