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First Thunderstorm

It gets dark Then you see a spark You hear a rumble Which makes the house tumble The rain comes down With a pitter patter sound You hear the wind Which may not make us grin It cools off With all the cost The first thunderstorm Came blowing like a horn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/26/2009 11:08:00 AM
Wonderful write here, Ema with great imagery ... I can almost hear the wind blowing ... smile ... Welcome to PoetrySoup and I look forward to reading more of your writes.
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Date: 11/25/2009 6:03:00 PM
First blow...nicely penned, have a nice Thanksgiving.
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