First Recital

monorhymed quintet

Aunty Karen, what is this?
A guitar, my little miss,
this is how you play, sweet sis.
Her music makes both dogs hiss;
but to Ella, it is bliss.


written 30 March 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Heemstra Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 7:57 AM
When I was a boy, I wanted a guitar. My parents gave me a plastic toy guitar, and I was so upset. So I never became a jukebox hero. Loved the write!
Roper Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Wonderful painting, Reason, congratulations on your win!!
A. Sharma Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 12:25 AM
Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write Reason..
Scars Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 8:49 PM
Reason, thank you for your amazing entry in my personal contest :)-luloo
Hicks Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 7:13 PM
I've responded to your comment on my Element Wind poem ... hope I've answered your question :)
Hicks Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Pretty adorable, Reason. When you're lost in the music, you don't care what others (humans or animals) think. I've had this experience with piano, though with guitar I'm a lost cause.
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