First Poem - Whirlpool

Luckless vessel plucked from the surface; sucked into uncharted fathoms. Relentless, roiling vortex consumes all evidence. Sated, exhausted, swirling eddy dissipates. All is calm. -------------- 31 August 2017 (this version) For the "First Poem" contest sponsored by Kim Rodrigues. (2nd Place) Notes for contest: I joined Poetry Soup a few years ago and posted this as my first entry. Reading back on it now, I am still pleased with its imagery and the message held within; how even the largest, most powerful man-made vessel becomes infinitesimal and completely helpless in the face of Nature's wrath. I feel the poem flows with a nice rhythm and, as one kind 'Souper commented, the shape of the Nonet form almost replicates that of the subject matter - subconscious intent or happy coincidence…? Poetry Soup has been instrumental in boosting my confidence and maintaining my output. The member-run contests provide continual motivation, whilst the kind and supportive comments from fellow 'Soupers are nothing less than inspirational. I thank you all.