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First of May

Mower in sprightly sun is driven by sprouting dandelions and buzz of busy bees. 2021

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Paige Hind

Date: 8/20/2024 6:31:00 PM

Clever! Loved the second line, wow!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2024 7:57:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 5/20/2021 12:21:00 PM

May is the month that gives old man winter a good riddance kick in the rear. It's the month of first flowers and an opportunity to use our noses for something other than blowing! The cherry trees this year were spectacular! Happily I don't have to mow the grass! Thanks for the stop by and pleasure to hear from you. / Maurice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2024 7:57:00 PM

Thank you, Maurice!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/4/2021 7:53:00 AM

I like the idea of the bees propelling the mowing of the grass Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2024 7:59:00 PM

LOL…thank you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/2/2021 5:53:00 PM

The dandelions are surely quieter than those annoying power mowers!! As for the bees, well... lol. ~ Hand-mower Guy

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2021 4:23:00 AM

I love hand-mower Guy. So true. Want to enjoy the sweet birdsong and the mowers are cattle calling instead. Even worse when my neighbor has an outside-tv on loudly. Early morning is the best time to catch peace. Hugs ~ Kim

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/2/2021 1:57:00 AM

I wish I could savour your beautiful nature, dear Kim. Here in Malta corruption galore. Someday there will be no fields to enjoy. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2021 6:04:00 AM

Well, that is sad. May you find beauty in each moment. Hugs...Kim

Judy Ball

Date: 5/1/2021 6:54:00 PM

Looking forward to warmer days. Planted some marigolds today. Loved the read. It made me feel a bit warmer. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2021 6:04:00 AM

So glad, my friend. Thank you, Judy!

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/1/2021 1:46:00 PM

I see it clearly, Kim. Dandelions are my nemesis. lol

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2021 6:06:00 AM

LOL...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2021 6:05:00 AM

LOL...

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/1/2021 11:19:00 AM

Wonderful write. God bless you, Love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2021 6:05:00 AM

God bless, you Regina! Thank you :)

John Fleming

Date: 5/1/2021 9:59:00 AM

Certainly no denying it captures the flavour of the whole thing...simple but very compelling. Gives one the impression of sharp, vibrant light ablaze with glint and glare...makes one feel warm all over. Enjoyed! Cheers, Kim! :) john P.s May is my favourite time of year: everything is so wonderfully refreshed and newly made -- marvellous!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2021 6:06:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your heartwarming feelings about May. :) Cheers.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/1/2021 8:14:00 AM

Great one Kim. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2021 6:06:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi!