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First Night

In silence the town sleeps We snuggle close for just a while On soft padded feet the night creeps I see the lust in your smile And try to hold you back awhile You crush the roses on my chest To feel my racing heart beat As the rhythm reaches a crest The room is filled with searing heat Oh the teardrop tastes so sweet As sunlight enters the bridal room Sleepily I purr on the rug Loving the floral, musky perfume You kiss my lips with a face so smug And lightly push me towards the coffee mug 11/10/12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/20/2013 4:43:00 AM
Beautifully romantic, this is.
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Date: 11/8/2012 2:23:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 11/8/2012 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the "Romance" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2012 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations Tahera, a super write xx
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Date: 11/7/2012 6:41:00 AM
congrats on your win Tahera....nicely done
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Date: 11/6/2012 10:31:00 PM
congrats Tahera on your 6th place win in the contest
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 11/7/2012 1:32:00 AM
Thanks Francine for my placement in your contest.
Date: 10/31/2012 10:52:00 AM
this is wonderful Tahera, so romantic, yet so true to life, one must have their coffee in a morning
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Date: 10/23/2012 2:57:00 PM
Amazing and passionate descriptive poem. You have a great talent for prtrying scenes to the reader.
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Date: 10/15/2012 10:40:00 AM
Just beautiful Tahera! You've described the scenery so well. Nice!
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:58:00 AM
enjoyed the visual language of your sensual piece, tahera... really dreamy and well scribed!... best wishes and huggs, hon!..:)
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Date: 10/13/2012 8:53:00 AM
Love and marriage romanticly expressed..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 10/13/2012 1:49:00 AM
wow, very passionate indeed. Great writing!
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Date: 10/11/2012 9:43:00 AM
amazing write <3
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Date: 10/11/2012 3:44:00 AM
Very passionate write Tahera.You have got a winner here!
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Date: 10/10/2012 11:24:00 PM
adorable
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Tahera Mannan
Date: 10/11/2012 12:42:00 AM
Thanks

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