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First Love

. the Sun warming my tightly closed eyes as I lie motionless in the long grass of Summertime, knowing that my love is but an outstretched arm away, her breathing now synchronised with my own. . a smile breaks across my reddened cheeks as my racing heart decelerates into rest; her hand touching my lips as if to withhold my thoughts, in vain attempt to bury this memory forever in her heart. . basking in the oneness of these golden moments, our eyes meet through the glinting green meadow as we each held aloft a ripened pineapple; we had managed to outrun the farmer. .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/14/2015 9:11:00 PM
Well, I wasn't expecting that ending! Great twist! Congrats on your win, Bill! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:19:00 PM
Bill, congrats on your wonderful win. SKAT love :)
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Date: 9/14/2015 4:11:00 AM
Superb take with this very happy write n a great win Bill! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/13/2015 12:41:00 PM
thanks - I like surprises ;)
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Date: 9/13/2015 4:27:00 AM
a cute write Bill made me smile congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/12/2015 8:33:00 PM
This was great, made me smile real big, thank you for entering and grats on your win! Keep outrunning the farmer ;)
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Date: 8/30/2015 9:11:00 PM
oh my, this ending is so CUTE!! This is indeed a happy poem and I love it!
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Date: 8/30/2015 12:54:00 PM
what boy among us has never stolen fruits....watermelon patches provided our favorite loot....these words brought memories from way back yonder....thanks for the trip down memory lane to make me ponder....
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