First Love

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The clouds were cumulus, which swept the sky above our field. You and I were happy then. Beneath those clouds we reeled. Oh, to be there once again: young, alive, and free! Among the bright wild blooms we swirled down by the azure sea. Such beauty dwelt inside our world, where land and water mingled. We stopped to kiss. Inside my skin, my body sweetly tingled! We looked and saw the tide begin to rise, so hand in hand, we walked down to the shore and lay, toes touching in the sand. Watching wavelets gently play as sun‘s last rays were spread across our beach, we felt new heat beneath a sky turned red. We sealed our love - with joy replete - when moon brought forth its light! I wonder - as we both grew cold - embracing through that night, if you dreamed, too, that we’d grow old together through our lives. 1/29/15

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Date: 4/13/2018 9:19:00 PM
Definitely a winner, Andrea. Beautiful.
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Date: 9/16/2017 5:18:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win with this lovely poem
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Date: 9/15/2017 6:07:00 AM
Congrats Andrea!
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Date: 9/14/2017 10:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win.
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Date: 9/14/2017 8:00:00 PM
Very descriptive and romantic, Andrea, and exquisitely-penned as always - love this! Blessings and congrats on your win! :-) <3
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Date: 12/17/2015 12:57:00 PM
ANDREA, CONGRATULATIONS on your nice win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 12/15/2015 5:54:00 PM
Beautiful Andrea. ..*smiles*
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Date: 12/15/2015 4:05:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea. Congratulations on your win and placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/15/2015 12:12:00 PM
The unforgettable romance of first love. What a lovely memory, so beautifully described in these images that will last forever! ~ Congratulations on a very merited win, Andrea! // paul
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Date: 12/15/2015 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 3/22/2015 12:17:00 PM
What a lovely piece thinking of younger years and what time will bring. Would be nice to recapture some of those days. love phyl
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Date: 3/9/2015 8:38:00 AM
I loveeee this piece Andrea. Absolutely amazing and brilliantly put together. A well deserved "7". Keep writing my poetry sister :) Hugs "B"
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:15:00 AM
Awesome imagery Andrea *Skat LOVE*
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Date: 2/8/2015 10:02:00 AM
This is a beautiful story, laid out well, described with feeling and written from the heart. The setting and the mood of this poem lends itself well to the subject matter of young love. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/8/2015 3:42:00 AM
First love is always special and it was expressed truly with great gutso in this excellent poem.
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Date: 2/5/2015 8:27:00 AM
A7 from me and this is a true gem. You captured this in poetic verse so very well. "Such beauty dwelt inside our world, where land and water mingled. We stopped to kiss. Inside my skin, my body sweetly tingled!" As always your talent and keen poetic vision shines! Definitely adding this to my fav list and hope to learn as I read it often...
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Date: 2/5/2015 1:48:00 AM
I reached the end of this poem saturated with delight at your adept and expressive rhyme that fully brought to life all that you surely intended.
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Date: 2/4/2015 6:15:00 AM
Amazingly romantic my dear friend! My huge congratulations on your well deserved super win. Thank you so much as well for sharing this excellent write! Many blessings to you! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/4/2015 2:35:00 AM
Cheers for this coming in number one Andrea! Yay! Congrats!
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:56:00 PM
very romantic poem Andrea congrats on 1st in contest hugs
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:23:00 PM
A very beautiful, romantic poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/3/2015 3:34:00 PM
lovely romantic write here, Andrea. will have to put on my thinking cap for your contest
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Date: 2/3/2015 8:13:00 AM
Congrats on your win. This one is simply amazing, full of pure images that speak of love's first stirrings. I love the ending...still "embracing through that night" It is like you have replayed it over and over.
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Date: 2/3/2015 3:51:00 AM
Absolutely perfect Andrea! Congrats on first place win!
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Date: 2/2/2015 10:40:00 PM
The romance, the ocean, sky and sand...all come together to create a perfect scene! Congrats on your first place win, Andrea...hugs, Rhonda
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