First Love

Outside the sterile nursery I stood,
looking in.
So many snuggly swaddled newborns asleep in little plastic cribs;
my eyes hungered for only one . . .

A nurse was bathing you,
removing the remnants of your forming nest.
Her face filled with wonder and adoration.
"Is this one yours?"
Soundless question behind glass . . .
"So beautiful!"

I had watched your head crown between your mother's legs;
rapt . . . awaiting the first glimpse of your face.
A mass of wet black curls and then your eyes;
you were born and I was smitten!
Unexpected, the rush of brand new love I did not know existed.

First grandchild!
You opened the door to a different world,
love wild and fierce,
protective and totally absorbed.

Four more times that door has opened,
love's arrow piercing my heart . . .
when you hurt,  the pain twists  within me.

You are the soul sunshine I crave,
my grandchildren.

Copyright, September 18, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Alex Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 12:49 AM
"when you hurt, the pain twists within me" - great poesy. Congratulations!
Gibson Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 4:46 PM
Thank you!
A   Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 4:53 PM
nice win..PD
Bateson Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 3:15 PM
What a beautiful image Faye. I was with my daughter for all 5 grandkids and it is the most amazing experience I have ever had. I know how lucky I am to have each and every one of them. Their presence is a gift to me.
Guzzi Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 2:20 PM
So lucky to experience this! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Ryerson Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 12:48 PM
This brings back two VERY blessed memories Faye! I'm proud to say I was present at the birth of my first and second grandchildren (Dixie and Heather) Favorite line: 'when you hurt, the pain twists within me' You nailed it with that one...Congrats on another winner - Tim
A. Sharma Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 12:54 AM
Subtle emotions well penned! Congrats on huge win! I as a doc have been conducting deliveries thru my career, normal and with caessarean section, it's such a lively gift of God! The first cry of life! Wonderful experience Faye!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 12:28 AM
So soft and what a beautiful moment..:) I have the privilege of assisting a doctor and had an experience on hands-on baby delivery..:) it's such a wonderful experience...:) and soon I will also hold the first baby of our family after my sister gives birth..:)
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 9:32 PM
You must be such an amazing grandma. I am not quite as sentimental as you are. My first one really had my heart though. He and I were so close, and now that he is turning into a young man, I hardly get a hello!! This is very beautiful. A poem for your grandchildren to treasure. Congrats on the win too.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 3:30 PM
This is so beautiful and special, it brought a tear to my eye. Congratulations Faye.
Richards Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 12:48 PM
I have watched in awe as my own grandchild came rushing into my world.....and never would my world be the same! The rush of love is everlasting! A beautiful memory !
Mehta Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 5:22 AM
Came back so soon to congratulate you on a fine win, Faye
Mehta Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 2:30 AM
Nice and happy memories of the past penned with emotions aND FEELINGS, fAYE
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