First Love

I glanced across the dance floor and saw her standing there
I saw her looking straight at me and I tried not to stare

I was kind of shy back then, for girlfriends, I had none
So when I saw her look at me I thought “is this the one”?

My friend Jim beside me said “Go on, ask her to dance”
And you'd better do it quickly before you lose your chance

My heart was beating rapidly as again I met her gaze
Then I walked in her direction, my mind was in a daze

“Would you care to dance”, (if she said no I would just die)
“Yes, that would be very nice” was her quick reply

I led fair maid onto the floor, put one hand on her waist
And slowly did the box step, while inside my heart raced

I knew right then I was in love, wings were on my feet
I hardly said a word to her til we walked back to her seat

With a smile I thanked her, and with shaking voice asked when
There was another slow one, could we dance again

She looked at me and sweetly said, “well now, that would depend”
“I'll dance if you will promise to introduce me to your friend”


11/26/2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/16/2012 2:34:00 PM
OH WOW...ENJOYED THIS ONE HERE...KEEP EM COMING
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Bob Quigley
Date: 1/16/2012 3:00:00 PM
Thanks Andre
Date: 12/5/2011 3:22:00 PM
Congrats on your poem win. Love this poem. - JH
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/5/2011 10:20:00 PM
Thanks J.H.
Date: 11/30/2011 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P. D.'s "first love poem (on the soup)" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/5/2011 10:21:00 PM
Thank you Carol
Date: 11/29/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congrats on the win. love phyl
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/5/2011 10:21:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 11/29/2011 10:31:00 AM
Oh no, that was a bummer she was interested in your friend. Cute write and this made me smile. love phyl
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/30/2011 1:45:00 PM
You pay your money and you take your chances phyl:)
Date: 11/29/2011 9:07:00 AM
Penned so sweetly,Bob.Congratulations on your win!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/29/2011 10:04:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 11/29/2011 3:01:00 AM
I was so happy for you until the last line, but then again it was her loss Bob, absolulely love this!! Congratulations on your win :) Wilma
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Wilma Neels
Date: 11/29/2011 2:24:00 PM
that is so true Bob!!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/29/2011 8:52:00 AM
It's ok. Turns out, my friend didn't like her. What goes around comes around. Thanks Wilma
Date: 11/29/2011 1:37:00 AM
great romantic poem here mate, well done....
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/29/2011 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Don
Date: 11/28/2011 11:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win Bob,....strange can be the matters of the heart! :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/29/2011 8:52:00 AM
Amen to that. Thanks
Date: 11/28/2011 10:04:00 PM
BOB,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win, IN MY "first love poem on the soup" CONTEST* I would also like to thank you for the support. Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/29/2011 8:53:00 AM
Thanks P.D. Appreciate the opportunity your contests provide.
Date: 11/28/2011 8:38:00 AM
Awww, what a bummer! Heartfelt piece, Bob. Many congrats on all your wins : )
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/28/2011 10:05:00 AM
But the good news is Jack, I was still available when the right one came along:)
Date: 11/28/2011 8:13:00 AM
Excellent poetry from you Bob.What a twist at the end.Enjoyed very much.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/28/2011 10:04:00 AM
Thank you Kash
Date: 11/27/2011 8:32:00 AM
A nice tender write.. would make a great love story if you had married her... warm write that is sure to do well.....Michael
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/27/2011 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Michael
Date: 11/27/2011 7:30:00 AM
Terrific writing Bob, it flowed like the dance they dance. Boy oh! boy I never expected the outcome, just so clever. Have a wonderful Sunday :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/27/2011 7:59:00 AM
Thanks James. And to you
Date: 11/26/2011 9:11:00 PM
hahaha. An unexpected ending there. Loved it.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/26/2011 10:24:00 PM
Thanks Andrea
Date: 11/26/2011 3:58:00 PM
aw man, Bob! That situation really sucks .... er ..I mean... creates a vacuum! What a BURN! This poem puts ya right there in the action or ...the lack of it.. Heartache or what? whew! NICE job ogf bringing the burn across to the reader through this great couplet of yours
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/26/2011 10:26:00 PM
Thanks Bob.
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