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First Love

Returning home again after many years away I find our secret path along the Fundy Bay That happy place where long ago we played Where all our dreams and promises were made Once again I lie down where daisies grow In fields above the banks where salt winds blow Golden memories rush through my hungry soul Returning pieces of my heart lost long ago I close my eyes recalling all the things we did Just the way they were when we were kids And I know without a doubt that you are here As your love for me falls from my eyes in tears We lie like angels looking up at clouds of cream As we watch them take the shape of all our dreams We laugh so hard at all the things we do and say To us life is just a stage a place to laugh and play We find the trail that takes us down to meet the ocean Where we swim in waves of jubilant emotions Then we walk along the shore together hand-in-hand And we write our love forever in the sand ~~~~~ Elaine Cecelia George, of Canada Entry for: Frank Herrera's contest - First Love Awarded First Place

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Date: 5/27/2014 8:02:00 AM
This is a very beautiful write. One that leaves the reader with joy in heart and pleasant thoughts in mind!! Bravo!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:42:00 PM
Beautiful poem, I am enjoying all your poems tonite, but I especially like this won, as I heard you read it for me. Lovely piece. Love Lee
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Date: 7/24/2011 10:58:00 AM
Just lovely and worthy of your win - Congratulations!
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Date: 5/23/2011 6:28:00 PM
Writing you love in the sand....come on! I was whipped once too, so I know what' you mean. The poem was excellent in form and it's content was complete. So was the love intent,,,,,you know what I meant. You have really got it going on. Keep the write-up up! GF
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place win Lainie in Frank Herrera's contest "First Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/17/2011 5:13:00 AM
Many congrats on your 1st place, Lainie : )
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Date: 4/17/2011 12:12:00 AM
No wonder at all that this one-- what a beautiful write on your first love-- thanks for sharing this moment :) amazing write super congrats on your 1st place win, Lainie :D
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Date: 4/16/2011 2:38:00 PM
How could this NOT be number one [and I had to go and be silly with the topic ;)] Congrad's on this WIN! Light & Love
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:37:00 PM
Congrats Elaine on your big 1st place win in the contest.Beautiful poem.---kashinath
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:27:00 AM
Super Congrats Elaine on your 1st place win.This is such a brilliant soulful write..Love ,Gautami
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:24:00 AM
first love tops it all, lainie.. winner! sweet cheers for being at the peak in this contest.. lovely! :) huggs
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:23:00 AM
Congrats Elaine on your win, this is such a beautiful piece. I feel honored to be in the top 3 with you. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 4/15/2011 7:24:00 PM
Very deserving of the first place honor...congratulations!
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Date: 4/15/2011 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations for your first place win with this lovely memory. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:30:00 PM
Congrats Lainie on your first place win in the First Love ...Kiss .. contest my friend.. excellent expressions ..well deserved .. enjoy with luv and happy weekend.. my friend...
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:11:00 PM
Oh, Elaine....it is such a pleasure to share a winning placement with such a lovely poem as this! Like watching a wonderful and touching intimate part of young love rewinding in this poem. Just lovely and emotional. (makes me think of a lovely movie I've seen) Congratulations! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/15/2011 3:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/11/2011 5:32:00 AM
enjoyed reading this very very much
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:33:00 PM
How very cute, 'Laine. A truly delightful poem. My best wishes in the contest. Thanks for reading my poem! Always, Annalise
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Date: 4/10/2011 5:15:00 PM
OMG honey bun you have a layout problem, the verse is running of to the right horizon! I'll check back later ;) Light & Love
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Date: 4/10/2011 5:11:00 PM
Interesting write..Good luck in the contest...The page is stretched way out..If you place your lines more like poetry would be written it will probably fix it...Enjoyed reading..Sara
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Date: 4/10/2011 12:37:00 PM
This is such a sweet story Elaine. Good luck in Frank's contest. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 4/9/2011 2:55:00 PM
awhh, this is so cute and totally charming, mt dear lainie!! goosenumps.. did one just now too re kisses! winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/9/2011 12:59:00 PM
beautiful narrative on the first innocent kiss, Lay
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Date: 4/9/2011 12:58:00 PM
wow, that kid was only 7?? And you five? man, oh man. I bet he would have been a great lover when he grew up. What a little Romeo. Do you know what happened to him, Lainie? This is gonna rank very high with Frank. I predict a top win.
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