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First Love

You were the first of all my loves the first to wake my heart the one to make it beat so wild pierced now with cupids dart You looked my way and stole my breath you turned a school girls head I was love struck there and then hung on every word you said Perhaps I was a little young but my heart at your feet I lay and gladly offered you my soul to do with as you may. How I longed for you to want me I was just the sister of a friend still I would sit and dream of us …..but dreams are just pretend Years ago I fell for you but for me you were never right and though my heart may flutter still it no longer leaps on sight You were the first of all my loves and so you'll always stay but in my heart the space you hold is now a corner out the way. Saturday 9th April 2011 Written by Emma Mantle For Frank Herrera's contest YOUR FIRST KISS, FIRST LOVE, or FIRST BROKEN HEART 2nd place

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Date: 8/17/2011 9:02:00 PM
What a lovely memory to have Emma, your rhyme and story are great, I enjoyed so much.
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Date: 7/22/2011 1:41:00 AM
ive just recalled my first love thanks to this poem, it has invoked a lot of memories for me , love it
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Date: 6/12/2011 4:15:00 PM
A great story, you are so creative
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Date: 5/1/2011 7:10:00 PM
whew!!! emma emma emma how many times do i have to say i truly live your poems!!!
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Date: 4/19/2011 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Emma in Frank Herrera's contest "First Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2011 12:40:00 PM
Nice story of 1st love,Emma.Congrats on your big win---kashinath
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:34:00 AM
Super Congrats Emma on your 2nd place win.What a cute love, very beautifully written..Love,Gautami
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Date: 4/15/2011 6:35:00 PM
Sensational writing, Emma. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie
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Date: 4/15/2011 5:37:00 PM
How sweet Emman anc congratulations on a big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:32:00 PM
Congrats Emma on your big win in Frank;s contest with this elegant entry luv.. enjoy and happy weekend too..
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Date: 4/15/2011 4:12:00 PM
So lovely, such a sweet memory! Congratulations on your winning poem!!
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Date: 4/15/2011 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/15/2011 1:46:00 AM
Top-notch Emma. Sure to top the winners circle. Lainie
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Date: 4/9/2011 7:35:00 AM
Very good entry Emma, your poetry today is pure art and talent... thanks fo sharing...Michael
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