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First Light Haiku No 32

Chilly reflections Grace the lake with pinks and blues Midst rocks and headlands

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Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/8/2011 7:00:00 AM

Hi D. Another masterpiece from the first lady of Haiku

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/7/2011 7:15:00 AM

The pinks and blues of the snow skies have been so beautiful in December, this is a wonderful haiku on those colours. I have lots of photos, went out every day - I am almost an expert on clouds now LOL. I love haiku also.

John Freeman

Date: 3/8/2010 7:14:00 AM

Deirdre, Congratulations with this one. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/1/2010 8:57:00 AM

Déirdre , you always light up the day , with your classy Haikus . Well deserved place in the winners circle ...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/22/2010 5:07:00 PM

a chilly write....shiver..Light & Love

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/21/2010 5:19:00 PM

Congratulations on placing in the contest, a wonderful Haiku. Caryl

Date: 2/21/2010 2:39:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your contest win. Enjoy your honor. Nice use of imagery in your poem. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen