First Kiss

first kiss tender eyes so innocent fluttering above her smile a succulent moist embrace as she surrenders By: Jeremy Siedlecki

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Date: 1/25/2011 3:57:00 AM

Congrats Jeremy on big win with this juicy one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta

Date: 1/23/2011 8:15:00 AM

Congratulations Jeremy, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Date: 1/22/2011 7:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this superb entry.

Date: 1/22/2011 3:05:00 PM

Congratulations on nthe well deserved win in the contest of Linda, jeremy

Date: 1/22/2011 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations, Jeremy. Loved the first two lines describing her face. LUv, Andrea

Date: 1/22/2011 4:20:00 AM

Hi Jeremy - Congrats on your BIG WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

Date: 1/21/2011 8:55:00 PM

Congratulations jeremy on your worthy poem's #5 place. Agape, Moses

Date: 1/21/2011 7:51:00 PM

Congrats Jeremy on your success in my Spicy for men only contest with this thrilling entry luv.. thankxx for supporting my contest...

Date: 1/4/2011 6:12:00 PM

Great entry, Jeremy!