First Kiss

first kiss

tender eyes so innocent
fluttering above her smile
a succulent moist embrace
as she surrenders

By: Jeremy Siedlecki
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 3:57 AM
Congrats Jeremy on big win with this juicy one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
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January 23, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations Jeremy, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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January 22, 2011 at 7:51 PM
Congratulations on your win with this superb entry.
Mehta Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 3:05 PM
Congratulations on nthe well deserved win in the contest of Linda, jeremy
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January 22, 2011 at 1:53 PM
Congratulations, Jeremy. Loved the first two lines describing her face. LUv, Andrea
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January 22, 2011 at 4:20 AM
Hi Jeremy - Congrats on your BIG WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC
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January 21, 2011 at 8:55 PM
Congratulations jeremy on your worthy poem's #5 place. Agape, Moses
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January 21, 2011 at 7:51 PM
Congrats Jeremy on your success in my Spicy for men only contest with this thrilling entry luv.. thankxx for supporting my contest...
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 6:12 PM
Great entry, Jeremy!
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