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First Kiss

“I see that your eyes are so blue," said Jenny to charming young Hugh. She blew him a kiss of ultimate bliss and fainted head first in the stew.

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Natasha L Scragg

Date: 2/10/2024 7:06:00 AM

Lol :-D

Terry Flood

Date: 2/5/2024 3:04:00 PM

Ha ha! Enjoyed. Congrats on your win, Jeanette

Jeanette Swan
Date: 2/5/2024 3:06:00 PM

Thanks Terry :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/4/2024 7:17:00 PM

Good one, Jeanette! CONGRATS! Janice

Jeanette Swan
Date: 2/4/2024 7:18:00 PM

Thanks Janice :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2024 3:18:00 PM

Love this. Congrats to you.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/4/2024 10:04:00 AM

Last line caught me by surprise Jeanette. Good one! Congratulations! :)

Jeanette Swan
Date: 2/4/2024 12:10:00 PM

Thanks Linda.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/4/2024 6:08:00 AM

Jeanette, congratulations on your first place win with your hilarious limerick!

Jeanette Swan
Date: 2/4/2024 12:09:00 PM

Thanks Tania :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2024 3:13:00 PM

Ahhh!!! So shy about the boy's and it was a disaster or so it seems. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Your visit to my page was delightful. Sara K

Jeanette Swan
Date: 1/25/2024 12:40:00 PM

A silly one. Thanks Sara.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 1/19/2024 12:07:00 AM

A funny poem. Well done.

Jeanette Swan
Date: 1/19/2024 1:45:00 AM

Thanks Jeanette. (I wanted Bartholemew instead of Hugh because it sounds more unlikely and hints that something might go wrong, but that name only works in strict rhythm by changing the stress)