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First kiss

That day when clouds curtained the brightness of hot summer's day, he came to meet me in pleasant white and gray. His perfume announced his arrival All my vital tasks at once seemed trivial I ran towards the door to welcome my king He stretched his arms and wrapped me into him. He gifted me the jasmines of his smiles I wreathed him with lillies of my love. His eyes hugged mine and he held me tight Our fingers coupled and my heart took a flight He drove himself closer My heart raced faster His breath swayed on my skin with all the grace His lips touched the rose petals of my face. That day when my life tasted its first kiss, the waves in the sea rose high to wet the clouds in the sky He is my Aladdin and I'm his Jasmine We rubbed the lamp of love and there emerged the box of bliss.

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Date: 6/3/2019 1:03:00 PM
If this was your "first kiss"...my gosh! where could you go from there? I guess this answers my question in my reply to your comment about my "first kiss" poem, huh?
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Date: 6/2/2019 2:04:00 AM
Romantic
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 6/3/2019 6:30:00 AM
Thanks a lot :)
Date: 6/1/2019 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful and most romantic, Swetha! A first kiss - the key to love - projected through flowered imagery. Regards // paul
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 6/3/2019 6:30:00 AM
Thanks a lot Paul :)
Date: 5/19/2019 9:27:00 AM
Lovely piece.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 6/3/2019 6:29:00 AM
Thank you Richard :)
Date: 5/17/2019 11:33:00 AM
The special moment beautifully brought out.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 6/3/2019 6:29:00 AM
Thanks a lot :)
Date: 5/9/2019 6:06:00 PM
wow, this is so romantic. I sure enjoyed the sweet images, Swetha. And thanks for your meaningful comment on my poem for my dad
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 5/10/2019 5:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea. :)
Date: 5/8/2019 11:18:00 AM
Superbly written sweet young love.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 5/8/2019 7:55:00 PM
Thanks a lot :)