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First Impressions

The ship is overwhelming, Way outside our comfort zone, Much different from the other River cruises we have known. We're jet lagged and exhausted, With no energy to spare, So shuttling to town just seems Too much for us to bear. We had a little lunch, though And enjoyed the view and food; Unpacked our stuff which really helped To brighten up my mood. We're sitting on a deck now, Simply soaking up the sun, The sea a sparkling vista; Our adventure has begun. I jump at first impressions, Often negative and flat But at least when I strike out I get another chance at bat.

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Date: 12/7/2018 8:28:00 PM
Good for you, Ilene. Ships of any size I avoid. I'd rather fly. What's there to do on a cruise ship or ocean liner but eat and exercise? And looking at water most of the time would drive me nuts! Each to his own, I guess. Glad you had a great time, though. / M
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:37:00 PM
Ha, ha! Three strikes and you're---up to bat again!! Another beauty, Ilene! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 11/28/2018 3:24:00 AM
I loved this, I Have been all over the world, and sometimes the first time I visit a place, well, lets just say when I go back more relaxed, I love it!!!!!!
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Date: 11/27/2018 9:10:00 AM
Wow, that sounds wonderful (as here I sit at my office desk reading and wishing) I'll bet it is beautiful and I hope you have a great time.
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