First Impressions

I first saw her sitting at a table,
sipping her coffee at a small café.
Her eyes were brown and her hair was sable
her smile the kind that takes your breath away.

                                        Sitting and minding my own coffee cup,
                                        steam was rising in misty morning air.
                                        His darkened gaze met mine when I looked up;
                                        his smile did curl a face so debonair.

Steam rose from her cup as it met her lips
our eyes convened as I walked down the aisle
this classy lady’s beauty could launch ships
as I passed her by she returned my smile.

                                        Who could not detect his confident air?
                                        his valiant stride like a peacock in plume;
                                        this man with wild wisps of soft windblown hair,
                                        his full lips like tender petals in bloom.

As her smile fades I can’t help but wonder
if her love is pledged to another man
and if we met would lives be asunder
disrupting the balance of life’s own plan.

                                        I chanced a glance; his hand for glints of gold
                                        eyes struggled and suffered a quick debate
                                        a ring on the hand that I longed to hold?
                                        for it would surely determine our fate.

Perhaps I should just admire from afar,
and not let nature’s balance come ajar.

                                        I was lifted without leaving my seat;
                                        it’s easy to love those we never meet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Thomas Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 9:50 AM
This was a great scene to peek in on. Great collab! :) Hello Twin ;)
Tripp Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Hi Sweetheart and thank you so much. It was a fun write.
Wigley Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 1:01 AM
Great collaboration, and I love the ending. Well done!
Tripp Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Thank you, Viv. John was a patient collaborator. It's not easy working with a ditz. lol
Warrior Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Suberly done by a poetic duo...a star for my poetic sis lol...love and light...^WW^
Tripp Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 10:53 PM
Awwww...been missing my favorite poetry bro. Hope all is well. Hugs.
Cunningham Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 11:31 AM
A beautiful sonnet you both have composed together. Hats off to you both. Tom.
Tripp Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 11:47 PM
Thank you, Tom. It was a fun joint venture.
One Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Great collaboration Rhoda.. Interesting last question... The poem flowed and rhymed so well..
Tripp Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 8:17 AM
Thank you S.O. I appreciate your time in reading and commenting. It was fun to write with John. He truly is a talented poet and a good friend.
Gondolf Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 8:12 AM
Rhoda, it was such a pleasure working together with you on this write, and an honor to work with such a talented writer. John
Tripp Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 8:15 AM
The pleasure was all mine, John. Thank you for taking your time to work with me.
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