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First Impression - Impress Me Contest

Oh Giorgio how can i imress you
What words can i say
Shall I write about a blue sky
On a summers day.

Maybe a mighty boat
That sailed away to heavens gates
Taking with it our loved ones
To a painfree  home, to watch and wait

Think i will write about the heartache
Brought on by those in power
Sending our lads to fight
A battle no one wants to endure

How about I write of love
You seek and you will find
Where you want to hold and touch
Lustily seductive, mind twisting kind

Hope i have impressed  you
With these few words of mine
Even more so I think
Cos i penned it all in rhyme



Penned 27 July 2013

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Nette Onclaud Date: 7/27/2013 5:56:00 PM I delight in your sweet words, seren.. distintly flavored to enthrall!..:) huggs Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 7/27/2013 7:45:00 PM Hi Nette, glad you liked it........Seren

Russell Sivey Date: 7/27/2013 6:10:00 AM If you don't place high I would be greatly disappointed Seren! I really enjoyed reading this amazing and superior poem this morning! What a lovely piece, such a glorious poem, Great Work!! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 7/27/2013 7:47:00 PM Hello Russell, we shall ser, i enjoyed writing it , thats all that matters ...Seren

Monterey Sirak Date: 7/27/2013 5:48:00 AM This one should do well in the contest. Beautifully written, you connect different ideas and make them flow as one. Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 7/27/2013 7:44:00 PM Oops should read Helllo Seren Roberts Date: 7/27/2013 7:43:00 PM Helli and thanks Monterey.....Seren