Victor Buhagiar Poet Triolet

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First Encounter

"recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind, like breezes blown ..."

                       Quote by _Samuel Taylor Coleridge (from his writings)


Oh, I never thought I would marry her.
We found ourselves under the mistletoe.
Her lips were warm, her perfumes sweetly were.
Oh, I never thought I would marry her.
Her love was all mine, a ring I'd bestow.
Her voice was silky, her speech soft like snow.
Oh, I never thought I would marry her
We found ourselves under the mistletoe.   

4 October 2022
Writing Challenge - Past Memories - ''T'' Forms Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

10 syllable per line.
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Constance La France November 12, 2022 at 1:01 AM Victor, you have penned a lovely Triolet and congratulations on your placement in my contest, Writing Challenge - Past Memories- "T" Forms, and of course I like the quote, and like the image, well done !

Beryl Edmonds November 3, 2022 at 7:37 PM Back with my congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest Victor, well done… Belle

Sotto Poet November 1, 2022 at 7:26 AM Back with congratulation on your contest win, Victor. I'm sure it's amply deserved with your great love Triolet.

Christuraj Alex November 1, 2022 at 6:38 AM Great love Triolet. I never thought so much passion could be amalgamated in this poetry form. Congratulations!

Alkas Poetry October 19, 2022 at 4:43 AM Oh, I never thought I would marry her. We found ourselves under the mistletoe. Her lips were warm, her scents were sweetly. Oh, I never thought I would marry her. Her love dela was all mine, a ring I'd bestow. Her voice was silky, her speech soft like snow. One day I shared a great love that happened by chance on New Year's Eve, it was beautiful, but it died (love) the mascas still remain with me, I never saw her again... poetic beauty my friend, congratulations alkas

Tania Kitchin October 8, 2022 at 3:00 PM Victor, a sweet poem!

Beryl Edmonds October 7, 2022 at 7:54 PM What a wonderful Christmas present Victor, to live in love with moments to treasure. A lovely Triolet… Belle

Michael Tor October 7, 2022 at 12:53 AM Victor the same words I said. No just kidding my friend. Best wishes for the contest...

Mystic Rose Rose October 6, 2022 at 4:17 PM sweet romantic and sighfully good :)

Alexis Y. October 6, 2022 at 12:45 PM Hi Victor, I echo what Linda said. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day my friend. PS. I’ve been super busy lately:-) Alexis

Eve Roper October 6, 2022 at 8:48 AM Sure miss that first encounter and all the rest after that. Many Blessings to You & your family .. Still praying for your daughter

Harry Horsman October 6, 2022 at 7:41 AM This is amazing poetry, Victor, Love the form, which you enhance with beautiful words of love.

Linda Alice Fowler October 6, 2022 at 6:52 AM So sweet and romantic Victor! hugs, Linda

Unseeking Seeker October 6, 2022 at 5:31 AM Oh my, my! Victor the romantic at his very best!

Delice Arleen Skelly October 6, 2022 at 3:27 AM Miracles can happen under the mistletoe....Nicely done...Delice

Deb M October 6, 2022 at 2:11 AM Lovely sweet poem Victor…Debx

Valsa George October 5, 2022 at 8:41 PM 'Her voice silky, her speech, soft like snow'... Wow ! Very romantic. All the Best in the contest, dear Victor !

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2022 at 12:41 PM so very sweet!! I plan to do triolet as well!

Kim Rodrigues October 5, 2022 at 12:36 PM Very sweet! Hugs ~ Kim

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 5, 2022 at 12:02 PM This is such a beautiful triolet, recalling precious moments, Victor. I love the picture, and the poem's refrain. Good luck in the contest. :)

Eve Roper October 5, 2022 at 8:05 AM Wow, an awesome flow in this form, Victor. a winner for sure. Blessings friend

Sara Kendrick October 5, 2022 at 4:57 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Must have been a magical kiss under that mistletoe. Thank you for sharing and for visiting my pages and taking time to comment on my work. Sara

Paul Callus October 5, 2022 at 4:25 AM Yours is a lovely romantic offering, Victor. Some memories will never fade away! ~ Regards // paul

Line Gauthier October 4, 2022 at 9:45 PM So sweet, Victor ~

Sam Kauffman October 4, 2022 at 4:18 PM Christmas magic and mistletoe all wrapped up like a romantic gift of memories! Delightful Victor! Blessings. Best wishes for the contest.

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