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"recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind, like breezes blown ..." Quote by _Samuel Taylor Coleridge (from his writings) Oh, I never thought I would marry her. We found ourselves under the mistletoe. Her lips were warm, her perfumes sweetly were. Oh, I never thought I would marry her. Her love was all mine, a ring I'd bestow. Her voice was silky, her speech soft like snow. Oh, I never thought I would marry her We found ourselves under the mistletoe. 4 October 2022 Writing Challenge - Past Memories - ''T'' Forms Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 10 syllable per line. Used RhymZone

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Constance La France

Date: 11/12/2022 1:01:00 AM

Victor, you have penned a lovely Triolet and congratulations on your placement in my contest, Writing Challenge - Past Memories- "T" Forms, and of course I like the quote, and like the image, well done !

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/3/2022 7:37:00 PM

Back with my congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest Victor, well done… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/1/2022 7:26:00 AM

Back with congratulation on your contest win, Victor. I'm sure it's amply deserved with your great love Triolet.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/1/2022 6:38:00 AM

Great love Triolet. I never thought so much passion could be amalgamated in this poetry form. Congratulations!

Alkas Poetry

Date: 10/19/2022 4:43:00 AM

Oh, I never thought I would marry her. We found ourselves under the mistletoe. Her lips were warm, her scents were sweetly. Oh, I never thought I would marry her. Her love dela was all mine, a ring I'd bestow. Her voice was silky, her speech soft like snow. One day I shared a great love that happened by chance on New Year's Eve, it was beautiful, but it died (love) the mascas still remain with me, I never saw her again... poetic beauty my friend, congratulations alkas

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/8/2022 3:00:00 PM

Victor, a sweet poem!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/7/2022 7:54:00 PM

What a wonderful Christmas present Victor, to live in love with moments to treasure. A lovely Triolet… Belle

Michael Tor

Date: 10/7/2022 12:53:00 AM

Victor the same words I said. No just kidding my friend. Best wishes for the contest...

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/6/2022 4:17:00 PM

sweet romantic and sighfully good :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/6/2022 12:45:00 PM

Hi Victor, I echo what Linda said. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day my friend. PS. I’ve been super busy lately:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 10/6/2022 8:48:00 AM

Sure miss that first encounter and all the rest after that. Many Blessings to You & your family .. Still praying for your daughter

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/6/2022 7:41:00 AM

This is amazing poetry, Victor, Love the form, which you enhance with beautiful words of love.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/6/2022 6:52:00 AM

So sweet and romantic Victor! hugs, Linda

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/6/2022 5:31:00 AM

Oh my, my! Victor the romantic at his very best!

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 10/6/2022 3:27:00 AM

Miracles can happen under the mistletoe....Nicely done...Delice

Deb M

Date: 10/6/2022 2:11:00 AM

Lovely sweet poem Victor…Debx

Valsa George

Date: 10/5/2022 8:41:00 PM

'Her voice silky, her speech, soft like snow'... Wow ! Very romantic. All the Best in the contest, dear Victor !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2022 12:41:00 PM

so very sweet!! I plan to do triolet as well!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/5/2022 12:36:00 PM

Very sweet! Hugs ~ Kim

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/5/2022 12:02:00 PM

This is such a beautiful triolet, recalling precious moments, Victor. I love the picture, and the poem's refrain. Good luck in the contest. :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/5/2022 8:05:00 AM

Wow, an awesome flow in this form, Victor. a winner for sure. Blessings friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2022 4:57:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Must have been a magical kiss under that mistletoe. Thank you for sharing and for visiting my pages and taking time to comment on my work. Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 10/5/2022 4:25:00 AM

Yours is a lovely romantic offering, Victor. Some memories will never fade away! ~ Regards // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/4/2022 9:45:00 PM

So sweet, Victor ~

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/4/2022 4:18:00 PM

Christmas magic and mistletoe all wrapped up like a romantic gift of memories! Delightful Victor! Blessings. Best wishes for the contest.