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First Day of Autumn

Late afternoon and the day is withdrawing into a chill. So much more now lays abandoned in sad pools of absence. Overhead, a tattered spiders web sags under the weighted remains of the dead. Today marks the start of autumn for another year and already a growing emptiness is being backfilled with fear.

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Date: 3/7/2025 10:05:00 AM
This poem has a real sad feel to it Paul...."a growing emptiness is being backfilled with fear" l gather Autumn is not your favourite season? As always your poems make me feel... Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/13/2025 9:55:00 PM
Hi Deb. Poem probably speaks to the mood of the times ...more general in nature rather than personal. Unease, uncertainty, shifting ground in the world order. Trying to get a ticket to another planet...booked out. Thanks for yr words dear friend..

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