First Day of Autumn

Late afternoon and the day
is withdrawing into a chill. 
So much more now 
lays abandoned
in sad pools of absence.

Overhead,
a tattered spiders web sags 
under the weighted
remains of the dead.

Today marks the start
of autumn for another year
and already 
a growing emptiness
is being backfilled
with fear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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M  Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 10:05 AM
This poem has a real sad feel to it Paul...."a growing emptiness is being backfilled with fear" l gather Autumn is not your favourite season? As always your poems make me feel... Debx
Willason Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 9:55 PM
Hi Deb. Poem probably speaks to the mood of the times ...more general in nature rather than personal. Unease, uncertainty, shifting ground in the world order. Trying to get a ticket to another planet...booked out. Thanks for yr words dear friend..
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