First Dates

she’d doll up curl her hair put on her best face don on her new heels her little black dress she remembered their first dates vividly
AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcguire Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 8:48 PM
How wonderful and excited he must have been to see you on that first date.
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 9:42 PM
LOL Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Timothy.
Mcferran Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 1:14 PM
My memory is terrible... but some things even I don't forget! Love how you phrased this- so true! ;)
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 7:35 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona.
Kiser Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 12:33 AM
A perfect image; well done.
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 8:42 AM
Thanks, ML. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 12:28 AM
Quite simply put, and yet so well done!
Gauthier Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 8:41 AM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
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