First Date Footles

Love note
He wrote

First date 
Can't wait

Red rose 
she glows

Wet palms
Smile calms

First kiss
Sweet bliss


By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, February 7, 2012
Ninth place in Valentine Footles contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 2:29 PM
Nice job here!!! Congrad's Light & Love
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 10:34 AM
Rhonda, I absolutely love your set of Footles. Well done and congratulations for your win in Dane Ann's contest.......S.Ronthorpe
Johnson Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 9:04 AM
So nice, read twice. Congratulations Rhonda. Love, joyce
Brown Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 8:50 AM
Congrats on your win Rhonda. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 8:50 AM
congrats Rhonda on a great win for a great set of Valentine Footles luv.. sweet...
Susan Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 7:58 AM
great job capturing the feeling here - the excitement and joy :) congrats on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:53 PM
Verrrrrry nice, Rhonda. ME LIKES
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 11:42 AM
Ahhh,Thanks, Andrea. I'm glad you like.
Poet Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 8:12 PM
I am scratching my head for a single and you have written 6...haha...You have actually crossed the limit of 5.Anyway a winner here.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:27 PM
LOL. I think I have trouble following directions! Thanks for pointing it out. Now which one to take out...hmmm.
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