Alice Who Poet Free verse

First Date

I drank you in
Whiskey no chaser
Rough around the edges
Smooth enough to keep me wanting more
I was drunk on your smile
Kisses tipping me in to no mans land
Everything was hazy but you
I don't remember the night
I just remember your hands and 
Laughter that bubbled like champagne

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Faraz Ajmal September 18, 2017 at 10:01 AM A very beautiful written poem, how special it is that sometime we doesn t remember the event or what happens but we remember the every second which we spend in the company of person we like, it s a really nice poem,

Silent One September 15, 2017 at 10:15 AM Well written Catherine..