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First date My first date was on a steaming train, really Blonde strange lady, no not plain, nice, A fellow followed from station to station, yes he did. Wanted to marry her, loves creation, and the rest. An old man on the train then he said, he did. “You won’t catch her, no chance Ned” So muggins me I had to try, had to. To show just him, the older guy? Heather told me all about herself, the lot. With no idea, I moved with stealth. got to smile. I lay upon her green skirt, lap, good fun. Played the part of the movie chap, so I thought. The old guy was in speechless shock, perhaps. Sleeper bound at 3 oclock, “What now” I thought, “what do I do,” virgin hey. First time was hers, first was me too. Ah yes the fire still burns, and lovers yearn, the thoughts of stolen kisses, do we from life a lesson learn, first love is surely blissss for Carol Brown's First date contest

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Date: 7/16/2011 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on this wild first date. You got a lot out of it. heehee!
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Date: 7/15/2011 3:43:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, Don
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Date: 7/15/2011 2:01:00 PM
Congrats DON on your terrific third place win in first date luv with this delightful write of ignite ...
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Date: 7/15/2011 1:02:00 PM
It is always a pleasure and a surprise to read your poems. congratulations on the win. Mike
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Date: 7/15/2011 12:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 9:24:00 AM
owww, a train full of puppy love and adolescent bliss... greeat job, don! picture-perfect with winning wishes.) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/28/2011 8:51:00 PM
Ah those memories. Nice job here my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/28/2011 8:35:00 AM
well DON u sure laid it out nicely luv.. and I mean that sincerely ..no pun intended..not... luv the Madonna line virgin hey my friend.. cute touch.. good luck in the contest by Carol.. awesome as u luv..
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Don Johnson
Date: 6/28/2011 4:13:00 PM
tell it like it is n was, when I was just a little hoss, the shiela caught me surely cos, I was dumb as duk krap. xo, Don (still am)
Date: 6/28/2011 6:50:00 AM
Hmm..Nice one Don
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:36:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Don. Love, Carol
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