First Date

Glennie went excitedly dating Ted Leaving her chaperon she went ahead Wearing nice shoes kept for years But torn out like rotten gears So, she’d her first date and dance barefooted Nov. 6, 2022 9.50am Lesson: Never wear again a pair of shoes kept/unused for 1-3 years. Written poem inspired by a related true experience of mine just recently. (Oct. 13,2022) howmanysyllables.com 10/10/7/7/10 31 words 44 syllables 192 characters A Funny Limerick - Make me Laugh Contest Judged: 11/11/2022 1:17:00 PM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin | Place 4 (up to 4 multi-w)

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Valsa George

Date: 11/13/2022 3:39:00 AM

It happens. Shoes kept unsued for long can get worn out abruptly ! Poor Glennie ! Congratulations on your win, Len !

Len Gasun
Date: 11/15/2022 4:10:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your loving comment and congratulatory greetings my dear friend Valsa. Blessings. Hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/11/2022 3:25:00 PM

Len, this is cute and funny, congratulations on your winning placement!

Len Gasun
Date: 11/13/2022 1:49:00 AM

Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear friend, Tania. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2022 6:51:00 AM

so cute!!

Len Gasun
Date: 11/7/2022 11:06:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Andrea for reading my limerick and for your encouraging comment. Blessings. Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 11/6/2022 1:52:00 AM

The image of poor Glennie comes so vivid to mind, Len. Perhaps I ought not to laugh about it...I'm also sorry for her. I know what you mean about putting shoes away for a long time, which tends to happen...I've had the displeasure of experiencing!! ~ Best regards, my friend // paul

Len Gasun
Date: 11/7/2022 10:49:00 PM

I think so my dear friend Paul. This poem is a fiction but so similar to what happened to me last Oct. 13. I felt sorry for myself for this experience however it sounds funny sometimes to me and to my friends to whome I've relayed the story. Was so grateful that nobody took photo of me ha ha ha. Thanks for reading my poem and your kind words. Thank you again and God bless to you my friend. Hugs