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First Dance Footle

first dance
deep trance

love young
just sprung

controlled 
untold

one day
in May

from sir
fresh fleur


9 February 2022

A Strand ( 1068) Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Brian Strand
1st place

Copyright © JCB Brul | Year Posted 2022

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 4/9/2022 12:40:00 AM You have given me an idea for a poem. Congrats on POTD - belatedly! Snicker. Snicker. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 2/22/2022 4:52:00 AM Sweet. Congrats on your POTD, JCB. Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 2/18/2022 2:18:00 PM Clever use of words... Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 2/15/2022 1:38:00 PM Oh this was fun; enjoyed the write. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/11/2022 7:39:00 PM Congrats on POTD, JCB! Login to Reply

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 2/10/2022 7:06:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD honour, JCB. Well done! You gave this form a new dimension - a story. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 2/9/2022 11:40:00 PM Con gratulation, JCB, love them all. Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 2/9/2022 4:32:00 PM So many emotions in so few words... a challenging form but so nicely rendered. I like the last 2 lines best. Congrats for your POTD! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 2/9/2022 1:42:00 PM JCB, very nice and congratulations on your win in the contest and receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ Constance Login to Reply

Debra L Brown Date: 2/9/2022 12:20:00 PM Congratulations on POTD! Blessings ~ Debra Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 2/9/2022 11:09:00 AM So lovely! Congratulations, JCB. This is a fave. :) Evelyn Login to Reply

Warren Doll Date: 2/9/2022 10:42:00 AM JCB, congratulations on POTD~ Warren Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 2/9/2022 10:04:00 AM "first dance, young love" This is so beautiful, dreamy and romantic. Your thoughts caress the page with such elegance and grace. Congratulations JCB, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 2/9/2022 9:39:00 AM JCB, you have packed so much lovely meaning into these few syllables. Footles are a real challenge for me; you make them LOOK easy! CONGRATS, well-deserved. Janice Login to Reply

Susan Lawrence Date: 2/9/2022 9:23:00 AM Love this JCB !! First dance deep trance … yes very cool ! Congratulations on POTD! Susan :) Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 2/9/2022 9:08:00 AM Back with congratulations on POTD Login to Reply

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 2/9/2022 8:48:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD! Fascinating~I have never done a Footle before~you have inspired me. :)Paulette Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/9/2022 8:26:00 AM Congratulations for POTD win. I loved dancing through your "First Dance Footle" write. Have a great/blessed day.............. Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 2/9/2022 8:22:00 AM Congratulations once more on this poem honored as Poem of the Day. Enjoy the double honor dear friend ! Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 2/9/2022 6:59:00 AM Congratulations for POTD. Enjoy :) Login to Reply

Unseeking Seeker Date: 2/9/2022 6:47:00 AM I like the Footle form myself, great write, JCB, congrats on POTD! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 2/9/2022 5:12:00 AM I am certain Brian will be pleased with this charming and romantic poem written in his form. Footles are a challenge, but oh so much fun to read and memorable too. Congratulations on having this delightful poem honored with POTD! I loved it JCB. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 2/9/2022 4:00:00 AM Congratulations again! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 2/9/2022 2:28:00 AM Congrats on POTD Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/9/2022 12:39:00 AM A very addictive form, you write one and have to keep going. Congratulations JCB on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom Login to Reply

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