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First Dance Footle

first dance
deep trance

love young
just sprung

controlled 
untold

one day
in May

from sir
fresh fleur


9 February 2022

A Strand ( 1068) Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Brian Strand
1st place

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Caren Krutsinger

April 9, 2022 at 12:40 AM

You have given me an idea for a poem. Congrats on POTD - belatedly! Snicker. Snicker.

Line Gauthier

February 22, 2022 at 4:52 AM

Sweet. Congrats on your POTD, JCB.

Silent One

February 18, 2022 at 2:18 PM

Clever use of words...

M. L. Kiser

February 15, 2022 at 1:38 PM

Oh this was fun; enjoyed the write.

Kim Rodrigues

February 11, 2022 at 7:39 PM

Congrats on POTD, JCB!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

February 10, 2022 at 7:06 AM

Congratulations on your POTD honour, JCB. Well done! You gave this form a new dimension - a story.

Harry Horsman

February 9, 2022 at 11:40 PM

Con gratulation, JCB, love them all.

John Watt

February 9, 2022 at 4:32 PM

So many emotions in so few words... a challenging form but so nicely rendered. I like the last 2 lines best. Congrats for your POTD!

Constance La France

February 9, 2022 at 1:42 PM

JCB, very nice and congratulations on your win in the contest and receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ Constance

Debra L Brown

February 9, 2022 at 12:20 PM

Congratulations on POTD! Blessings ~ Debra

Evelyn Judy Buehler

February 9, 2022 at 11:09 AM

So lovely! Congratulations, JCB. This is a fave. :) Evelyn

Warren Doll

February 9, 2022 at 10:42 AM

JCB, congratulations on POTD~ Warren

Brandy Nicole

February 9, 2022 at 10:04 AM

"first dance, young love" This is so beautiful, dreamy and romantic. Your thoughts caress the page with such elegance and grace. Congratulations JCB, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Janice Canerdy

February 9, 2022 at 9:39 AM

JCB, you have packed so much lovely meaning into these few syllables. Footles are a real challenge for me; you make them LOOK easy! CONGRATS, well-deserved. Janice

Susan Lawrence

February 9, 2022 at 9:23 AM

Love this JCB !! First dance deep trance … yes very cool ! Congratulations on POTD! Susan :)

Eve Roper

February 9, 2022 at 9:08 AM

Back with congratulations on POTD

Paulette Calasibetta

February 9, 2022 at 8:48 AM

Congratulations on your POTD! Fascinating~I have never done a Footle before~you have inspired me. :)Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

February 9, 2022 at 8:26 AM

Congratulations for POTD win. I loved dancing through your "First Dance Footle" write. Have a great/blessed day..............

Valsa George

February 9, 2022 at 8:22 AM

Congratulations once more on this poem honored as Poem of the Day. Enjoy the double honor dear friend !

Heidi Sands

February 9, 2022 at 6:59 AM

Congratulations for POTD. Enjoy :)

Unseeking Seeker

February 9, 2022 at 6:47 AM

I like the Footle form myself, great write, JCB, congrats on POTD!

Connie Marcum Wong

February 9, 2022 at 5:12 AM

I am certain Brian will be pleased with this charming and romantic poem written in his form. Footles are a challenge, but oh so much fun to read and memorable too. Congratulations on having this delightful poem honored with POTD! I loved it JCB. Blessings xxoo