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First Crossed By a Gypsy, Now By a Dang Witch

“Close the book, ring the bell, light the candle.” The witch’s words resounded in my ears. My problems now were more than I could handle and so I hoped she’d vanquish all my fears. She stared at me across the darkened room and then commanded me that I must stay until my wish was granted. Then a broom she grabbed, and out the door she flew away! The magic lay in me, the hag had said. I only had to wish with all my might. But with my kind of luck, I might be dead before I’d get what I had wished that night. I sit here still; she’s left me with a curse! No health care yet, and now my back is worse! (sorry to belabor this, but now you see what preoccupies my mind these days!! Linda's contests always seem to bring out this topic for me lately. The gypsy referred to in my title was in my last poem I did for Linda!) By Andrea Dietrich for Linda-Marie's "BELL, BOOK AND CANDLE" Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/26/2020 12:29:00 AM
I see from the comments that you got a first for this one 9 years ago. It's still potent, and accurately describes your ongoing battle with your condition (btw, the title could use a quick edit on the word Gypsy). Love it!
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Date: 9/26/2020 9:25:00 AM
thanks, I never even noticed my typo. This would have been the time my shoulder was giving me such fits and we did not have health insurance for me to deal with it. It's been one thing or another since my 40's!!
Date: 3/6/2013 10:32:00 PM
I for sure love this Andrea, going to fav;s ,, thank you for reading and liking my haiku six, think I should rename them Tanka ot ?
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Date: 11/8/2011 7:25:00 PM
My problems now were more than I could handle and so I hoped she’d vanquish all my fears.---You never cease to amaze me with your pristine vocabulary and perfect use of phrase! Eloquently haunting tale a white boy can Digg!:)
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Date: 10/24/2011 9:29:00 AM
1st place! you go girl! I like how you twisted this around from her granting you a wish to putting a curse on you. congratualtions!!!!!
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Date: 10/24/2011 7:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Bell, Book, and Candle" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2011 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea, A worthy winner for sure...Luv Margaret
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Date: 10/23/2011 7:55:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win, Andrea. Sorry to hear about your back problems. I pray that they will be solved, healed soon. Kim
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Date: 10/23/2011 6:51:00 PM
Great going Andrea. Congratulations. These gypsys and/or witches will cross you every time. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/23/2011 6:50:00 PM
Hooray for you Andrea!! Sure hope you can be free of the wicked curse very soon!! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/23/2011 5:57:00 PM
Great to see your worthy first place Andrea. I had my fortune told one time when I was about 16 years of age, Smile. After she ask for the third dollar, I decided my fortune would keep. "I left." Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/23/2011 5:37:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on a first place win in my contest with this dazzling delight luv..
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Date: 10/23/2011 3:11:00 PM
an awesome piece Andrea..thankxx for supporting my contest luv..judging tonight.. good luck..
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Date: 10/15/2011 7:59:00 AM
It horrid getting old but look at the alternative? Light & Love
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:04:00 PM
I understand what pain does to a person and you wish it was gone. I wish that for you too. love phyl
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Date: 9/28/2011 11:28:00 PM
When in pain it's understandable that we might try anything to relieve it, looks like you lucked out with your witchy friend...Seriously I hope you do find relief soon. good one for the contest. I can't get anything going on this one, not even a poor offering...luv Marg
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Date: 9/28/2011 11:03:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Andrea.. good luck luv.. know your words will be terrific ones..luv..
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Date: 9/28/2011 9:56:00 AM
Contentment is the name of the game. Godly peace makes all of this look lame. I'm not sticking my finger down your throat. Or trying to poo poo all that you've wrote. I enjoy an entertaining poem. And after we have fun, we want to go home. I'll keep you in my thoughts and prayers. For all your back pains, and all your cares. Good luck in the contest. I would think you would be one of the best.
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Date: 9/27/2011 3:45:00 PM
Very witty piece, Andrea. I hope you shove the dang witch off her broom if you ever see her again! Seriously, I'm sorry to hear your back is worse : (
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Date: 9/27/2011 11:32:00 AM
Didn't know about your back, Andrea. Bummer! Hope you are doing better right soon. Love, daver
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Date: 9/27/2011 7:55:00 AM
Take care and get better. Tony
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Date: 9/27/2011 6:22:00 AM
Nice write. I hope you feel better soon
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Date: 9/27/2011 5:46:00 AM
dang medical procedures and all.. been a frequent visitor of the emergency room for the past month, andie... also with back pain... the hag should give us better HMOs and insurance.... greaat stuff with winning streaks..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/27/2011 2:34:00 AM
oh this so so cool, Andrea- I saw your title and it made me smile-- I wish I thought of something along these lines-- very timely for Halloween :D I still have to catch up in email-- oops & we had a power outage.... hugs to you and I hope your back would be better, I can hope and pray, right?
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Date: 9/27/2011 2:16:00 AM
I couldn't think of anything to write for this one Andrea, You did well. I hope you feel better soon. I am sending more reiki to you. Hugs,
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Date: 9/27/2011 12:08:00 AM
Sorry to hear, or read, about your back problems! My old grandmother has back problems every day and she suffers from it's pain all day and all night! It's horrible! You've written a great write here talking about your witch being just the way they are, rude, and unhelpful, they just want you eye or something! Great for Halloween! Awesome write!!
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