First Born

I could not sleep that night . . .

alone 
you made the awesome leap
between here and there.
Just past the last breath
your soul traversed infinity.

Did you cry out 
or was no sound allowed?

I laid awake;
no prayer upon my lips,
my brain besieged by mindless things.
Why did I not sense 
the passing of your spirit's sweetness
in the dark?

Faye Lanham Gibson
© 3-27-2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Carmack Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 2:45 PM
Nothing comes against a person's faith like this. I am glad you have persevered and that God has brought you here.
Nehls Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 1:28 PM
Hi, Faye. I like to go back and read a poets first poem at the Soup. This one is so very sad, Yet you expressed your feelings in a beautiful way. this has got to be one of the hardest things in life. Thank you so much for sharing those thoughts.... Robert.
A   Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 2:04 AM
Hi Faye... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
Puddifoot Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 5:49 AM
thought I'd read the first one you posted, and I'm glad I did, although I found it so painful to read...I know the pain of losing a baby, I can never express the enormity of it, though I've tried many times in different poems...here you've done exactly that, so beautifully and poignantly, those last two lines say everything...
Gibson Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 5:53 AM
Charlotte, thank you. If you have time, please read Awful Weight if Agony. It is also about my son
Carrillo Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 2:20 PM
A very nice poem indeed. Welcome to poetry Soup. Hope your stay here is pleasant. .. Lucilla
Gibson Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 6:49 PM
Thank you. I am enjoying it. Trying to get around and read the work if other writers.
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 1:08 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Faye :) - I choose your first moving/sad written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ryerson Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 6:21 AM
My humble thanks to all who have commented...
Williams Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 2:08 AM
Faye a big welcome to the soup, poignant words, keep writing....David
Roberts Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 1:36 AM
Welcome Faye, So sad the words, so much feeling....Seren
Gorelick Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 1:32 AM
Welcome to the soup my dear. I have read all your listed poems and am looking forward to reading more. Tim has given us a bit of a bio for you..life is hard as they say....write and write and it will help. BG
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 1:24 AM
Oh such an emotional heartbreaking poem about losing a child. Have read the blog and know its from personal experience. I only started writing after my hubby developed cancer - find it so therapeutic - hope it helps you to release your thoughts too. Hugs Jan xxx
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April 8, 2014 at 12:11 AM
oh my goodness. what a heartbreaker. I was coming here thinking it was a poem about another person like me, first born in their family, but it is so much more. Welcome to soup. If all your other poems are this good, it will be great to see you all the time.
A   Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 11:15 PM
Faye, a heartfelt poem, In some ways I can relate, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Roberts Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 9:39 PM
welcome to the Soup, touching piece, thank you for sharing it with us
A  Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 5:40 PM
Hello Faye, this has been one heartfelt write. I can't imagine what you are going through.... , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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April 7, 2014 at 4:59 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup my friend!...This is so heart -breaking but so beautifully written...SO similar to my experience - Tim
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