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First Birthday Cake

He eyes the candle, reaches out To touch the flame it’s bringing, But someone quickly blows it out; Then everyone starts singing. The brightly frosted cake is pushed To where his little fingers Cannot avoid some contact And those gooey frosting bringers Then find their way to cheeks and chin And finally, to lips, Resulting in repeated dipping Of the fingertips. The birthday face is nicely smeared With neon green and blue. His cute plaid shirt is also streaked With cake and icing goo. The grown-ups laugh; the cameras flash. The moment justifies The mess created by this birthday’s Yummiest surprise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/15/2019 2:44:00 PM
I'm so old now I really can't remember my first birthday, though it was probably my mother's Yellow cake made from scratch. A delightful write, Ilene. / M
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Date: 2/10/2019 7:59:00 PM
Well done - especially the first verse! My late wife put the children in the bathtub (sans water) to enjoy their first birthday cake. Aloha! Rico
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